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Post by "Big" Billy Bush on Jul 14, 2019 20:04:18 GMT -5
I'm looking for general feedback regarding by performance with this character. What am I doing well? What am I doing wrongly? What should I do differently? RP's so far (most recent to earliest):
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Post by Duke & Ava on Jul 15, 2019 21:00:24 GMT -5
I really enjoy the consistency in which you write Billy. His phrasing feels very true to how a guy like him would speak.
One thing I do think he could benefit from is a bit more self-reflection. I'm not saying change him in anyway, I like how he's an unapologetic asshole, but it would be interesting to hear whether or not he regrets aligning himself with Emily Thorne now that it didn't parlay into some kind of more concrete success for him, for example.
Other that, I am enjoying the character and I do look forward to seeing how you further develop him.
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Post by Joe Summers on Jul 18, 2019 22:38:13 GMT -5
Keeping it brief due to being super busy, but... Billy is probably my favorite of your characters that I've seen you play in a while. Obviously, Mr. Abraham had more depth and time to be fleshed out, but I'm really liking what you're doing with Billy thus far.
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