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Post by hcft4 on Jun 9, 2012 12:01:12 GMT -5
Figured I'd open this topic now because, well, I've got nothing better to do. Anyways, anyone with comments, questions, critiques involving my roleplays or my characters in general can feel free to post here (and don't worry about being gentle, I like it rough). And now that I've alientated most feedback by disturbing people: One thing you may want to know. I'm aware one or two of you enjoyed some of my previous work so it might do to know that I am connecting The Father to my previous character 'M'. You may recall that M's mother joined a cult just before she died? Mmm. If you aren't familiar with 'M' I've attatched two Adobe docs that compile all my work with him so you can familiarize yourself with the background of the characters and my writing style if you so chose (and feel free to provide feedback on them now if you so chose). The Rants file containt he rants I wrote, and the storycompilation file contains all the story-related roleplays. Both files can also be found here: RantsStoryAttachments:
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Post by hcft4 on Jun 9, 2012 12:04:54 GMT -5
For some reason only the one attachment made it so, here's the other. Attachments:
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Post by Mighty Frank on Jun 10, 2012 15:55:05 GMT -5
TL;DR
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Post by hcft4 on Jun 10, 2012 16:29:15 GMT -5
TLDR Too Long. Didn't Read.
Frequently used acronym by lazy, ignorant people in Internet Forums, where their urge to type something exceeds their ability to read something or if they generally lack semantic ability to either comprehend or respond to a post due to underdeveloped brain.
Stating that they were to lazy reading someone else's post just confirms the ignorant attitude and also often destroys the discussion in the thread.
The average IQ of people typing TLDR in Internet forums is about 64.
Since I am a lonely masturbating boy with no brain I have no capacity to read all you said, but due to my lonely social life I still feel like typing something in this thread, I will type TLDR. For the newbs ;D
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Post by Mighty Frank on Jun 10, 2012 17:38:27 GMT -5
TL;DR
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Post by hcft4 on Jun 10, 2012 20:00:46 GMT -5
Heheh, point taken, Duke.
But I don't expect people to read it now. When I do post a roleplay, should you read them, you may find certain references hard to follow. You may find the big wall of text handy then. Or if not you, perhaps someone else.
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Post by Mighty Frank on Jun 12, 2012 18:31:40 GMT -5
I enjoyed Exodus. Haven't read Let Us Pray yet... your description is your strong suit definitely. I did find the dialog a bit hard to follow at times being that it lacked the traditional "Name: Dialog" set-up or the literary "Blah, blah, blah," So and So Said, format... but good read none the less.
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Post by Katelyn Mayhem on Jun 12, 2012 19:21:09 GMT -5
TLDR Too Long. Didn't Read.
Frequently used acronym by lazy, ignorant people in Internet Forums, where their urge to type something exceeds their ability to read something or if they generally lack semantic ability to either comprehend or respond to a post due to underdeveloped brain.
Stating that they were to lazy reading someone else's post just confirms the ignorant attitude and also often destroys the discussion in the thread.
The average IQ of people typing TLDR in Internet forums is about 64.
Since I am a lonely masturbating boy with no brain I have no capacity to read all you said, but due to my lonely social life I still feel like typing something in this thread, I will type TLDR. If you wanted to find a good way to alienate people from giving feedback this is a quick way to do it. For the newbs ;D
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Post by hcft4 on Jun 12, 2012 19:36:15 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback Duke. I'll make adjustments.
As far as alienting people, that quote came directly from urbandictionary. I thought it sounded funny, it wasn't meant to be personal.
Edit: And for the record: I don't have to do anything to alienate people either. They either hate he by nature or by history, either way I'm fine with that. I'm here because there's one or two people that do like to still read my work, I don't care about making friends.
If a mod would be so kind as to close this topic, another failed attempt at socializing. Thank you.
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Post by Joe Summers on Jun 12, 2012 21:02:07 GMT -5
Dude, it's Cam. He doesn't mean anything by it. That's what he does.
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Post by The Enigma on Jun 12, 2012 21:23:42 GMT -5
Can I be your friend, Father?
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Post by Joe Summers on Jun 12, 2012 21:26:10 GMT -5
I can agree with what Duke said about the dialogue being hard to follow in Exodus. I like the use of colors (and that's how I tend to do it) to differentiate between who is and isn't speaking, and it allowed me to eventually catch up with who was saying what in the RP. Still, a bit of clarity before introducing a speaker/their color would help make things a bit easier to read on average, especially when you're using multiple characters, and they're one-offs that don't have an established color assigned to them.
I liked "Let Us Pray", though. Solid introduction to the character these past two RPs. I look forward to seeing what direction you take him in, especially when you're dealing with more established characters that you can focus on in a more specific way. Good work.
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Post by Katelyn Mayhem on Jun 12, 2012 21:51:38 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback Duke. I'll make adjustments. As far as alienting people, that quote came directly from urbandictionary. I thought it sounded funny, it wasn't meant to be personal. Edit: And for the record: I don't have to do anything to alienate people either. They either hate he by nature or by history, either way I'm fine with that. I'm here because there's one or two people that do like to still read my work, I don't care about making friends. If a mod would be so kind as to close this topic, another failed attempt at socializing. Thank you. I live off of trolling people. If you argue with every post I make you're going to end up getting really mad at a lot of silly stuff while I keep linking comments to buddies on AIM and laughing hysterically. I don't have a life beyond this. You've been warned. Though, I will state the record that you seem like a cool cat and, other than you inviting me into a fed and then shutting that shit down and disappearing on me, I have no reason not to like you. I troll everyone equally, long time friend and newb alike. It's how you know I care.
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Post by Katelyn Mayhem on Jun 12, 2012 21:54:10 GMT -5
Also this reminds me of the Preacher character I started to make for your fed....
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